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Hello, Aylah This shined because you talked about what you would do inside: sit by the fire. This reminded me of when I went to the Snow. Maybe you could change the background colour of your name.
Kia ora ,Aylah I like you're first sentence because it reminds me of something happening to me in the winter time. Keep up the amazing work. From Whare
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Hello, Aylah
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This reminded me of when I went to the Snow.
Maybe you could change the background colour of your name.
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Kia ora ,Aylah I like you're first sentence because it reminds me of something happening to me in the winter time. Keep up the amazing work.
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