Mrs Bava wanted us to post a bit of writing onto our blogs because it is almost the end of the term.
I found it easy to copy and paste my work onto a google slide and to make my background.
I found it hard to actually find a bit of writing in my drive.
I really enjoyed making my background and re-reading my writing.
Next time I will find a bit more writing with lots more detail.
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ReplyDeleteHi Aylah.
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you did the background.
Maybe next time you could add some more adjectives in to your writing.
Hi Aylah!
ReplyDeleteI really like this slide because of your background it is really in the afternoon vibe. One little thing you could work on is trying to make your paragraphs in one slide each cause I couldn't really see the writing that much it was a bit too small. But it is mainly very immaculate. Good job Aylah!
Tiana-B
Hi Aylah I like how you have done your background it looks so much like a sunset it is also a very descriptive story you sounds you have added the parents names and maybe you could have added a image or some Polyline.
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